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| James Rosenquist |
she fell into the frame
her story clotting on the canvas
the passing
thoughts of strangers
clawed across her gauge
itching her id
raiding
her pantry abstract
archivists
re-arrange
offered as part of One Stop Poetry's Friday Poetically
6 comments:
oh snap, love it! the clotting, clawed, itching her id...intense...and the rather abstract end...sends the mind a spooling which is at its essence pop art...
You have absolutely captured the essence of not only the prompt image but pop art as a whole in these words. Great poetry ~ Rose
Hi there cat !
This is my first time here and I am so happy to read you I dont want to leave...teeheehee !
Loved what you have done with the prompt !
Following you !!
ENJOY !
Great play on the prompt.... I knew pop art is a trap for the unwary
The opening was/is/and will be top notch. The entire piece was clever. You nailed the prompt and captured me from the start. SUPERB as always.
http://henryclemmonspoet.blogspot.com/2011/06/sky-hole.html
And now she's just a pretty picture, or can she somehow scratch her way out?
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