widens
just studs
the bare embankment
mottled
past tense pageantry
the parallels
parallels find no friction
just the smooth slow
slide of a manufactured
curve
clean you see clean
tidy
today the clouds
look like callouses
bruised by the skin
of the sky
and when that sun sets sets
sets split ends
whisper it
split ends copper strands
cross linked polyethylene
insulated orators
we are
insulated orators
3 comments:
The title was grand and wonderful word combos throughout too, really brings it alive.
Like the way this ambles down the page, stopping and restarting an image, a mood, with a lot of staccato jabs that engage.There's also a mechanical tinge to the word choice and repetition that's esp effective in that last lines. Good stuff.
the clouds look like callouses bruised by the sun....wicked cool lines there....always a journey through your words, with def flow...
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