tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16594325.post5348696313914603536..comments2023-06-03T15:20:11.598+01:00Comments on thinking cat: fell fall fellcat crayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11044586189027923825noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16594325.post-73276459739087977742012-02-15T04:08:45.538+00:002012-02-15T04:08:45.538+00:00the clouds look like callouses bruised by the sun....the clouds look like callouses bruised by the sun....wicked cool lines there....always a journey through your words, with def flow...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16594325.post-26777540123056754562012-02-15T00:50:02.268+00:002012-02-15T00:50:02.268+00:00Like the way this ambles down the page, stopping a...Like the way this ambles down the page, stopping and restarting an image, a mood, with a lot of staccato jabs that engage.There's also a mechanical tinge to the word choice and repetition that's esp effective in that last lines. Good stuff.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16594325.post-49994314044091911162012-02-14T23:54:56.796+00:002012-02-14T23:54:56.796+00:00The title was grand and wonderful word combos thro...The title was grand and wonderful word combos throughout too, really brings it alive.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.com