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14 February 2011

when I try  

to  

taste you 

as if  

you  

were mine  

the pith  

peels  

from my mouth

and dances

back  

into yours

2 comments:

dustus said...

"the pith
peels"

Wonderful turn of phrase; well followed by the image of dancing. Excellent sense of movement to minimalist lines.

Ghostdog said...

Delivered like a zen circle. As Adam said there is a "notion of motion" in here , greatly placed.