I really like it! It reminds me of flying in my dreams :)
nice...i like the diametric images...and the word play of cool coo...
Coo coo coolness!
"spirallinginparallel"Use of "coo"is also inventive; short lines with impact.
Call it liberation from the bondage of self or spiritual growth or simply a moment's serenity, acceptance of the moment as it is the purest breath of free, clean air. Nicely done
Wonderful flow, dreamy verse. A column of inspiration, just as it is posted as such.Nice resounding words, patient imagery.Kisses to cat!
I am touched that you all found something in it to like and connect with, thank you for reading
Moved me,really nice stuff!
Good one... Cool coo of the sky.. very wonderful words.. and I enjoyed it immensely...ॐ नमः शिवायOm Namah Shivayahttp://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/02/whispers-night-along-sea.htmlTwitter @VerseEveryDay
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