form does the same to me as well...damn form...haha...some wicked flow in this and amazing imagery....smiles.
Ha! Very clever. Well done. k.
Such a clever write--form always ties me up in knots!
Nicely done !
Dry and witty twisted villanelle that works very well--and what's unbearable she must bear is a most appropriate line here. Form can confine, but pressure also makes diamonds. ;_)
an intense struggle lies here,but in the end she made it there.I think bastard might be a strong word, but I too find form frustrating (and yet quite rewarding. nice piece.
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