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| Photograph by Neil Alexander |
tessellating time
dissipating movement
twisting through the hues
of breathing in
and breathing out
eyes parked perched
in their sultry
sentry sockets
in the stillness
in the stillness
of liquid
in the hush
in the hush
of the flow
offered as part of the penultimate One Shot Sunday over at One Stop Poetry
8 comments:
i like the words you use...tesselating time...eyes parked perched in their sultry ...gives a fine flow and feels good on the tongue when speaking it loudly
Smooth poem that appropriately ends on the word flow. Great title and command of language.
twisting through the hues
of breathing in
and breathing out
One of the spaces in between...
whew...nice flow, i agree with claudia on the lines that do it for me...very well played
Great sense of fluid movement!
Lyrical and smooth, much enjoyed ~ Rose
Very smooth... loved it!
Great flow...
walk the past
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