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tall ships
comfort
distraction
of the skyscrapers
doubts
about vision shift
fault collapses over small print
dive
retune
deepen
come
roaring back
catch your breath
go to work
weaken
after all the reasons
close in on the nagging reminder
this still
collision
like bullets
the (here and now)
in her hands
a hard
fairy tale
6 comments:
wicked cool...particularly like the presentation of the first one...the cut outs....way cool...
Nice discovered poem - every word found in the print media. This is well cool. Love the photo presentation too.
I was working through the cutouts until I saw the transcript and became lazy. I'm with the guys above - very cool presentation and class message of reality beside the dream !
Cool structure and flow, well done!
A cool piece!
Very creative presentation and weaving of words ~
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