| she | breathes | through | the | pulsing | cracks | of | her | mouth |
| breathes | deep | the | dark | honour | of | her | aching | calm |
| through | the | light | she | follows | time | unstuck | and | motionless |
| the | dark | she | soothes | quietly | telling | fearless | tiny | lies |
| pulsing | honour | follows | quietly | hiding | untold | secrets | fading | effortlessly |
| cracks | of | time | telling | untold | truths | find | form | effigies |
| of | her | unstuck | fearless | secrets | find | her | helplessly | unravelling |
| her | aching | and | tiny | fading | form | helplessly | surrenders | her |
| mouth | calm | motionless | lies | effortlessly | effigies | unravelling | her | sadness |
29 June 2012
9 x 9
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9 comments:
Wow. You went all out here. a 9 x 9 Square Poem. That is so ambitious, but you nailed it, so I bow to you. Really nicely done. Not only adhering to the form's parameter, but for the poetry itself, complete with some exceptional phrases/lines here. Great read. thanks
Whoa. A 9x9 square poem. Not only do I speak for myself, I think I can speak for Lewis Carroll when I say: Bravo!
see you just upped the bar...i think 9x9 is the largest of the challenge so far...and you worked it so well....seemless in flow....great emotion in it...nice...
wow...GREAT job...i'm just speechless...9 x 9 and it really is a poem if i dare say so..which is masterful
This is lije a jazz line that crawls the bannister into darkness. Really nicely done, form and content.
Oh my word; this is unreal. You are amazing.
I'm not sure how to type the slow clapping thing, but that's what I'm doing.
Wow! This is blowing my mind a little bit! Well done. :)
Wow!
Just
Wow!
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