tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16594325.post5890052925281691726..comments2023-06-03T15:20:11.598+01:00Comments on thinking cat: articulate pavementscat crayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11044586189027923825noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16594325.post-9292501720894018812011-08-15T04:21:48.661+01:002011-08-15T04:21:48.661+01:00The first two lines are absolutely killer!The first two lines are absolutely killer!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16594325.post-50600731483707771292011-08-14T20:45:00.762+01:002011-08-14T20:45:00.762+01:00Wonderful! There is angst and emotion in your word...Wonderful! There is angst and emotion in your words. Felt, poet! Am loving this traveling adventure this evening :)Tashtoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15847190224960829574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16594325.post-72720988359278540222011-08-14T17:34:48.293+01:002011-08-14T17:34:48.293+01:00great flow and imagery thank yougreat flow and imagery thank youAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10624767707167052328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16594325.post-9478835266710881182011-08-14T16:24:30.055+01:002011-08-14T16:24:30.055+01:00Hey Cat,
Great 2 c u @ the bar.
I can really fee...Hey Cat,<br /><br />Great 2 c u @ the bar.<br /><br />I can really feel the zeitgeist flowing thru your piece.<br /><br />Some great word play and links with some hard imagery...and you even managed to ref The great JP.<br /><br />Bonus!Arron Shillinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17989854352644796752noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16594325.post-46911210310812712552011-08-14T10:15:09.732+01:002011-08-14T10:15:09.732+01:00ha - hate to be repetitive but also loved the buil...ha - hate to be repetitive but also loved the building carcasses and burning bins...the gritty touch and heartblood you've worked into your write...greatClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16594325.post-6814458095551726012011-08-14T06:38:00.112+01:002011-08-14T06:38:00.112+01:00I loved this, Cat. I too liked the line about the...I loved this, Cat. I too liked the line about the carcasses of building and burning bins. Very kool. I like reading about cities and places I haven't been. Great descriptions.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16594325.post-36502579266956884682011-08-14T03:21:05.708+01:002011-08-14T03:21:05.708+01:00the carcasses of building, weighted feet and burni...the carcasses of building, weighted feet and burning bins...nice grit of the city right there...love the title and its ref in the verse as well...piliticans dont live in that part of the city so they will never know...smiles. nice pollock ref too...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com