tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16594325.post5152587859055882007..comments2023-06-03T15:20:11.598+01:00Comments on thinking cat: What to call it?cat crayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11044586189027923825noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16594325.post-75805001312089487112012-02-08T21:51:52.818+00:002012-02-08T21:51:52.818+00:00This poem calls for more than one read to understa...This poem calls for more than one read to understand it...it conjures up all sorts of thoughts for me, which I guess is your intention, given the name of your blog.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16594325.post-53521401149634085082012-02-08T18:10:34.150+00:002012-02-08T18:10:34.150+00:00I love the pace and build and ultimately, the calm...I love the pace and build and ultimately, the calm of this piece. beautifully done!Sheilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06541409754494611831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16594325.post-27455844897629920202012-02-08T16:31:31.974+00:002012-02-08T16:31:31.974+00:00The beginning of this is vivid and build so slowly...The beginning of this is vivid and build so slowly and perfectly to the core message you underline in so many lines--images are very speaking for me, and so much resonates besides just the clean, strong finish. If I had to pick a line, it would be '...I want to feel that sweat, that salt/that tornado that bent your face to it's grid...' Fine poem, cat.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16594325.post-3213796349693750632012-02-08T03:49:19.759+00:002012-02-08T03:49:19.759+00:00personally i am rather fond of the broken and impe...personally i am rather fond of the broken and imperfect...<br /><br />how we fantasize and fetishize the high of the high we wish for ...ha aint that the truth...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16594325.post-65164011185907997662012-02-07T22:39:07.028+00:002012-02-07T22:39:07.028+00:00let me breathe
in the depth
of what
is broken
imp...let me breathe<br />in the depth <br />of what<br />is broken<br />imperfect ... yes i know what you mean...i have no use for those all-too-straight-lines as well...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.com